Essay1-7 A movie review

I like watching movie. I’ll write about “My Blueberry Nights”. I watched it about 4 month ago. This movie’s casts are Norah jones, Jude Law and other famous actors. Norah Jones is a famous singer. She tried the act to this movie. Why I interested in this movie because, this movie’s picture is very mysterious. I don’t know what I express my feeling. Anyway, I wanted to see this movie. I went to theater with my friend. Norah is broken hearted her ex-boyfriend. It made her very sad. She goes to a coffee shop. This shop’s owner is Jude. Her mind is cracked because her ex-boyfriend was cheated with other girl. So, she goes to the coffee shop day by day. Jude makes all sweet and foods in this coffee shop. The blueberry pie was remained always. But, she likes the blueberry pie and him. He was worried about her. One day, she decided that she left this town. She goes some town. And she stayed there a few days. She works hard, because her mind was not heals yet. She wanted to works don’t sleep. Jude was so worried about her. She sent him mail sometime, but she didn’t back. She stayed some towns. She learned and felt through other people. Her mind became healing. She noticed one thing. And Jude was also that. They need each other. When she broken hearted, he made her save kindly. He kept watched her quietly. After 6 month or 1 year, she came back him finally. She eats a blueberry pie again. Its taste is not change. She found again. She needs him. He watched sleeping her. Time is slowly. I thought this movie’s mood or air is passing slowly. I thought I want to meet like Jude.
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Essay------Intriduce myself to host family rewrite2

Hello. My name is Kazu. I'm 19 years old. I live in KUMAMOTO now. I learning english at university. I like trip, reading book, listening to music, and watching movie. Do you like movies? Which kind of movie do you like?

I have four family members. My father is working at city hall. My mother working as a part – timer. My younger brother is high school student, and he belonging to baseball team.
I like cats and dogs. I used to have both of animals.
How many people do you have in your family? Do you like animals? Do you have any pet?

Our university consists of 4 faculties and 11 departments. There are about 7000 students in this university. This university have good study abroad exchange program. So, I want to challenge it!
I introduce about KUMAMOTO. The famous spot are KUMAMOTO castle, SUIZENJI park. KUMAMOTO castle is very beautiful! The famous food are BASASHI, KARASHIRENKON and IKINARIDANGO. I like IKINARIDANGO. It is my favorite sweet.

I want to enjoying home stay. I'm looking forward to seeing you.

Essay-------２０２８ self introduction 1-6

It is 20 years later. I will be 39 years old. I want to be stay in Australia then, because I went to there twice before. This experience was very important for me. I don’t decide what I want to do in my future. I want to go to there with my parents. They don’t go abroad often. Especially, my mother never has been to abroad. She will be about 60 years old then. I can not imagine it! I will write about 2028 self introduction for now. This is my wish.
I’m 39 years old. I live in Australia with my family. My family members are my husband, my 3 children and I. I got married when I was 28 years old. I have 3 children. Today, my parents will come here. They came to here 3 times before. My father was retirement his job already. My mother was also that. I am always busy for take care of my 3 children. I like go to shopping, driving with my family. We come back to Japan once in a year. My family is looking forward to see us. I have work here. It is travel agency. This job is the customer’s travel arrangement and to result for their troubles. I like this job. I like watching movie, reading book and listening music. My hobby is not change since I was a student. My favorite food is Japanese food of course. I cook Japanese food almost day.
I must go to air port. My parents will come. I will puck up them. I am looking forward to see my parents. I will go to sea with my parents. I like go to sea. My father is also like it, so he likes to go to sea. My mother is looking forward to shopping maybe. We will enjoy today! This is my 2028 years one day and introduction.
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Essay Worst Day in My Life 1-5

When I was 2 years old, I sitting on the baby chair. Moreover, I sat on the table. I remember it even now. My mother was in the garden. I was slept. Then, I feel down from a chair and a table. I was cried. My mother came and surprised. She went to the hospital with me by her car. I was operated immediately. My left elbow was broken. I remember when I went to emergency room, but I don’t remember the pain. Operate was finished safety. I spent at the hospital for some weeks. I did not remember, but my mother told me that I felt sad then. My memory started the accident, so it is the first memory in my life. The first memory is broken my elbow. It is a big impact! We talked about the accident sometime. My mother also remembers well it.
I have a scar in my elbow. I had 23 stitches, it is big. While I spent at the hospital, my parents, grand parents and my cousins were came. My father brought a TV in my room, because he thought I’m sad. I think I did not feel sad, because everyone visited me. The day is worst day, but after that, I was not sad. Now, my mother thinking that I don’t like hospital. She told me sometime, “You don’t like hospital, because you had injured then!” I don’t notice it, but she seems to correct. The accident reminds me of not pain, but also my mother’s tenderly.
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Essay introduce my self 1-1

I will be staying with your family for six weeks. I'm a student of KGU. I study English this university. I live in a KGU dormitory. I have four family members. My father is working at city hall. My mother working as a part – timer at near my home. My younger brother is high school student, and he belonging to baseball team. How many people are in your family?
I like watching movie, go to trip, reading book and listening to music. I'm watching movie in English usually, because I want to hear English. I like action movies. Do you like movies? Which kind of movie do you like?
I went to Kyoto last November with my friend. The temples in Kyoto attract visitors from all over the world. I took many pictures there. I want to show you these pictures. Have you ever been to Japan? I like cats and dogs. I used to have both of animals. Do you like animals? Do you have any pet?
When I go to your town, I want to visit a lot of tourist attraction. I want to eat many foods. I don't have dislike food. I can eat any food.
Kumamoto is very hot in summer. How's the climate in your town? Are there beautiful sea near home? I want to swim in the sea.
I can't speak English well, but I will try to talk to your family. If you have some family rules, please tell me. I will keep it. I want to enjoying home stay. I'm looking forward to seeing you.

Essay----A memorable day in my life 1-4

My memorable day in my life is the trip to Singapore. I stayed there only few hours, but it was very fun. I’ve never been to southeast country before then. I was so excited. The scenery is unusual. The climate in Singapore is warm. I heard that there is rain a day every day. I went to there in February, so I felt warm and sweaty immediately.
I went to the temple. It is beautiful color, red and gold. In the temple there are many images of Buddha. I took some pictures. There are many booths near the temple. My friend had a fruit juice there. It was fresh. I ate a sweet. It is looks like a small cake, but taste is different. I love it! I bought a present for my parents at drug store. It is “Tiger balm”. I didn’t know this. My teacher and friend told me. This is work on muscular pain, stiff neck and so on. The smell is unique. I watched some apartment. It is colorful. Some apartments are pink or blue. My image of Singapore is clear color.
I like Singapore airport too. It is a new airport. Plants fill it. All around the places is beautiful. I could enjoy shopping and watch many backpackers there.
I could not watch “Merlion”, but I enjoyed the old downtown Singapore. It is better to go to only tourist attraction. My trip is very short. The day was exciting for me. I want to go with my mother again. She will be like there same as me. (272/4362)

Essay----------My favorite animals 1-3

My favorite animal is cats. I used to live in my hometown, I kept a cat. His name is “Kuu”. I found a little cat when I was high school student. One boy walked with a cat. A cat was very cute and he has blue eyes. I asked him, “Whose cat?” A boy said, “I found this cat. I want to keep this cat, but my mother said no. Can you keep this cat?” “Yes, of course” I don’t know why I said of course then, but I lifted a cat into my arms. He was crying all time until I went back home. My parents were surprised of a cat and me.
He likes milk. Kuu who feels lonesome easily, so he can’t sleep alone at night. And when he goes out at garden, he is persecuted by some stray cats. One day, he went back home at night. I din’t notice he covered up the mouse into his mouth! My mother and younger brother were very surprised. My mother was angry. Unfortunately, a mouse runs into KOTATSU. We were at a loss. He has unique character. We love him.
When I left my hometown, he went away somewhere. I was shocked to hear that, but I had a kind of feeling that he will be that. We remember him even now. We are talking about him sometime.
Animals give us heal and smile. They also have emotion as same as human. We must understand it and we must not keep unstable. If I have chance keep animals again, I want to keep with responsibility.
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Essay-----My treasure 1-2

My treasures are family and friends. My family is always supporting me. My father is obstinate man, but he is working for my family for a long time. He is indeed a man of few words. I’m not talking him a lot, but I’ll try to talk with him more. My mother is cheerful and active person. She is also working for my family. My younger brother is high school student. He belongs to the baseball team in high school. He is not a regular member. I’m supporting him. I quarrel with my family sometime, but I appreciate my family.
My friends give me a lot of things. If I be in trouble, my friends give me some advice. We can share smile, sad, and happiness. It is very important for me. If my friends be in trouble, I want to help them. When I entered this university, I was worried about friends, because I leave my town. I came to here alone, but I’m enjoying university for my friends.